Review for Harry Potter and Unfamiliar Power

Harry Potter and Unfamiliar Power

(#) desdaemar 2011-11-21 02:23:43 AM

Not too bad, but you really need to work on your spacing, and possibly get a beta.

Author's response

Yay thanks for the review and being patient with the grammatical errors. It really isn't my strong point, I know.

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