Review for Lemonade Mouth
Lemonade Mouth
(#) PartyPooperX 2011-11-24 10:44:14 AM
MRS KROONNN!!!
Awwww was that the most precious thang? I think I may have died! The writing was incredible, the story short but sweet and pretty random but in a good way. I like how you changed subtly from different points of view without actually writing Frank's POV every other paragraph and totally pissing me off, making me break the computer and throwing myself off a bridge.
Cos God knows it's happened before.
Very good, comrade, very good.
Awwww was that the most precious thang? I think I may have died! The writing was incredible, the story short but sweet and pretty random but in a good way. I like how you changed subtly from different points of view without actually writing Frank's POV every other paragraph and totally pissing me off, making me break the computer and throwing myself off a bridge.
Cos God knows it's happened before.
Very good, comrade, very good.
Author's response
Now WHEN has that ever happened before? Hmmm? Although I know what you mean. It can get pretty annoying. Glad you like but please don't die! It's nearly Christmas and I need presents!
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