God, I love this story.
The ONLY problem that I have with it is that it is a little hard to read. If you space it a little more then it wont turn out to be a block of text.
I'm not trying to sound bitchy or anything. Sorry if it came out that way. I'm not really good with words...=\
But this story is just amazing. Update soon please.
Author's response
I totally understand! I was trying to fix it but since im fairly knew to this site it's kinda hard to fix :/ BUT I will fix it soon so don't worry! XD Thanks sooo much for the review and especially for reminding m of my problem! :D