Review for Making Billie Blush

Making Billie Blush

(#) GreenDaySavedMyLife 2011-12-27 08:01:49 PM

A little confusing because of the era mix up (i.e. holiday and the teacher etc...) but other wise it was well written and cute! If I may make a suggestion, try and keep everything in the same era instead of combining them, it makes things a lot easier. Like, instead of Holiday you could use "1000 hours" or "Only of You", songs written while they were still in high school.

Otherwise, it was really adorable and I love imagining the guys blush too. I don't consider you a fangirl for it. It makes them seem like real people with real emotions, and blushing and being embarrassed is one of those emotions, it makes them more relatable(: Fantastic job!

Author's response

Awh thanks! I'm glad you like it, and yeah I totally see where you're coming from with the whole era thing. It's just that when I wrote this fic I didn't know many Green Day songs, so I just chucked one in there.

ChemKill xo

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