Review for Perfectly Imperfect
(#) tortillachip 2011-12-31 05:49:39 PM
I'm glad that you liked the resturaunt scene, I wanted to show that Mikey still does get picked on by the general public and how it effects him/how Gerard and Frank deal with it.
It's good to know that you liked how Gerard was trying to justify not saying anything and how he hasn't really changed his ways from what they were in the prequel. It's kinda like he's learnt but he isn't using what he's learnt in a helpful way and he still thinks that he knows what is best, I hope that came across in this.
I wanted Frank to be the voice of reason in this story, the one kind of controlling Gerard to make him do all of the things that he should be doing.
I tried to keep this Gerard true to how I portrayed him in the prequel, so I'm really pleased that you picked up on that/think it works.
The next chapter should be up tonight.
Thank you so very much for taking the time to leave such a kind, helpful review; it really does mean a lot! :)
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