When I think of Gerard, I tend to let out a big disappointed sigh.
It frustrates me that he has the potential to be a wonderful brother, but he just can't seem to grasp how. It flits around in his brain, and just as he starts to get something right, he looses it and everything goes to shit.
I agree with Frank, I really hope Mikey goes and finds Pete.
I really loved this chapter, and thank you so much for the fast updates! I don't know how you write such quality chapters so quickly :]
I wanted to portray Gerard as exactly how you have just described him; he has the potential to be a great big brother yet he just can't get his around how because he doesn't know where he's going wrong.
Aw, thanks; I'm really pleased that you liked this chapter! My chapters aren't that great, but I write them in the evenings when I've got nothing else to do or after school (now that it's term time). The secret to fast updates is coffee. Lots and lots of coffee.
Thank you very much for taking the time to leave such a nice review! :)