Review for Not all bunnys are innocent

Not all bunnys are innocent

(#) RainPaw 2006-10-19

Half the chapter was a author's note, The idea is really good just got to make it with more detail and maybe longer, But it's sounds like the start of a great story. Update soon

Author's response

Thanks rainpaw,I like that your being honenst
and I will make much more detail next time!