Review for Checkmate

Checkmate

(#) Orual 2006-10-19 07:58:04 PM

Very nice. I really liked how you explained Edmund's title of "just." It seems sensible that his first hand experience with justice and mercy would leave that sort of impression on him. The "sire" and "your majesty" bits made me laugh. Great job.

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