Aw~ poor girl. This chapter was freakin awesome (except I might say that for, like, every chapter.
I only have one suggestion. Y'know how you have a big gap between each update? Maybe, at the beginning of each update, you could put a little summary of what happened last so your readers don't have to scramble around their brains trying to figure out what happened last. :)
Thats actually a really great idea! Sorry that it has been taking me so long to update - shit just keeps coming up. But regardless that is a really good way to help the readers. Next time Ill do just that :D