I don't usually read this kind of fiction, but this got my interest immediately. The beginning looks very promising. I like the idea that Gerard still protects his little brother. I can so imagine how he makes sure that nobody messes with his Mikey. :D
I love this already! I will certainly read the whole story. I'm looking forward to it. :)
And you are such a good writer, you got all those emotions so vividly written. I admire you so much. :)
Thank you very much; I'm sooo pleased that this has your interest, that's all I really want when I write something is to make it interesting.
I'm glad that you like the idea of Gerard protecting Mikey, he is definitely not going to let anyone mess with his little brother!
Thank you very much for taking the time to leave such a lovely review, you've made me smile! :)