Review for Guardian Ghost
(#) tortillachip 2012-01-17 06:46:21 PM
I'm relieved that you like this idea, it's different from what I normally write in the respect that I've never done anything supernatural-ish, so it's really good to hear that you like the idea.
I'm pleased that you like Frank's character. I wanted him to be someone who thinks that he has everything because his life is what most people perceive as perfect, but in reality he is very lonely because nobody knows the real him, maybe not even he does. Frank isn't stupid, he does the know the right way to behave in different situations and the right thing to do but that doesn't necessarily mean that he will do it.
You've pretty much hit the nail on the head with Frank's personality in this; he has his reasons, even if they don't make sense to other people, and he'll act on them even if he knows he's in the wrong. But I don't think that he ever actually wants to hurt other people in any way. Frank is smart, he just needs someone to show him that he doesn't have to pretend to get others to like him.
Thank you so very much for taking the time to leave such a friendly, detailed review; it really does help me write! :)
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