I CAN'T BELIEVE THIS IS OVER! It's a seriously amazing story, and I can only thank you for writing it. It really is great - the concept (even if you did steal it ;D), the plot, the way it's written - it really is just epic.
Feel so sorry for the boys though - the whole thing really was doomed to fail! Can't say I'm surprised Gerard died, but still sad. Really it was Bandit who ended up worst off - poor girl. But seriously, the mistakes those boys made; they never had a chance! It was nice Ray coming back at the end though.
As I already said, really great story, and I hope you'll be starting something new soon! If not - fair enough - but if so, I'll be looking out for it!
Also, I don't think I've ever commented on the epic-ness of your user name!
See ya soon with any luck, dude!