Review for The Visitor
The Visitor
(#) CatscanFlyy 2012-01-23 11:59:11 AM
I liked it and it definatly captured my atention strait away however I will say two things. One I felt there were too many POV changes for such a short story and two the making up at the end went a little quickly, I would have liked to find out more of what happened, but other than that great job I really enjoyed it!
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