Review for Harry & the Mysterious Curse of the GirlWhoLived

Harry & the Mysterious Curse of the GirlWhoLived

(#) StoryMagnet 2012-01-23

Original but a little slow-paced. I'd like to at least feel we're trying to make progress on the curse with each chapter. If the curse isn't the central plot point, what's the point?

Author's response

Thanks for the notes - I'll work on it.