Hello! I think that this is AMAZING! Keep writing;) I love this chapter and the whole story!
Author's response
Thanks. :) I've been trying to do what my readers suggest, i.e. put Shannon & Skyla back together, because I realized with a Jared/Skyla pairing it was harder to write than with a Shannon/Skyla pairing. So I put them back together. I'm going to either a) post a chapter of a new story or b) post an author's note really soon so keep your eyes peeled.