Review for Teamwork
(#) DisenchantedEnding 2012-02-05 03:34:55 AM
But this is so amazing. It's very original and inspiring and some of the similes you used were amazing: "Just let my life trickle down the drain like raindrops dripping off a rose petal," and "anguished stripes of shame, kind of like an artist’s intricate brush strokes on a dull canvas."
Yeah, you did amazing. Outstanding, even. Very well done. :)
I'm sorry that you went through something similar to this, I know how it feels which is kinda why I wrote this. My family and friends acted like Gerard, my uncle was kinda like Ray and then what Frank says in this is what I would want to say to anyone who went/is going through this type of thing, including my past self. If that makes any sort of sense.
Thank you so very much for taking the time to leave such a lovely review, it really does mean a lot coming from you! :)
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