Review for Haru and the Kobra Kid

Haru and the Kobra Kid

(#) FlyingSmoke 2012-02-14

WOO. ALMOST BETTER THAN VALENTINE'S DAY SMUT. ALMOST. But I know you're not a smut writer. You're an action drama writer. And this turned out good. If this is a re-post... huh? I unno. It felt like a new chapter to me. I do wonder where his jacket went though... But wow. Cliff hanger there on Kobra's part. I wanna know how he reacts! I WANNA KNOW!
cough sorry, sorry, I just wanna KNOW!
(God damn it, Rachel, stop yelling at the poor girl...)
Sorry. I get excited. Like a fuckin' puppy.
It's just lovely to know Party's been sold out. NOT. Fuck, now I have to worry... Damn blue-haired girl. You're not worth the blue hair. You need, like, green hair or something. But don't worry, girl, relatively soon, you'll have a robotic arm and stuff. Bob'll help you. Promise :)
(Yes, I saw what you did there. Noice, Sara, noice.)
Update soon! Y muchas gracias para escribas la 'chapter'.

Author's response

Damn! Trust you to figure out what I did! :L Yeah, the blue-haired girl (who I shall not name because the other readers will have to wait and see who she is) needed to be put in something else. She's a character I've grown to love and I don't want her to die just yet ;) And yes, she did sell Party out because she is such a lovely wonderful and caring girl of course. Hey, and who's to say that she hasn't got any robotic parts? She might just have... ;)

Oh, and this was a repost, because the first one refused to be published so I had to do it again :L

-Sara xoxo