This story was very good. The best psoh that I've read in a long time. I've always thought of D as a hermaphrodite as well, it just seems to fit him. In the score list, I couldn't find one that really fit this story, more like 2 or three that would have equally had places could I have chosen more than one... So I just scored it for originality. I've really never read a psoh that had Ambiance, Hot, Moving, Original, and many other things all rolled into one. I'd give it a 10 if I could.
There is only one thing. In the dialogue at the end of the fic, Leon says: "Good to here." I have a sneaking suspicion that you meant "hear"... Just letting you know in case you missed it.