Review for Harry Potter and unfamiliar power
(#) Hippothestrowl 2012-03-05 02:03:39 PM
Frankly I think the Dursleys have lost their marbles if they think they can get away with this. Unless Voldemort is controlling them they sound OOC and OTT!
In all honesty I can't really remember the staring chapters too well a it was such a long time ago and a lot has happened since then. I will definitely look back over them and possibly edit them a bit though it will have to be when I have finished writing the next chapter.
Thanks for the criticism I do value it, keep reading and let me know what you think.
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