Wow, plz do continue! A couple of my friends actually LOVE your story and they're just too lazy to review (actually me 2), so here're the apologies we owed you.
Excellent writing, English isn't my mothertongue, and I really wish I could write so good as you! Oh BTW, my teacher asked me in the class why I did well in my "Use of English" subject in class, I answered that becuz I learnt a lot from listening to MCR. Hehehe...
Author's response
YAY! I feel loved n-n
I've always been a spelling and grammar Nazi so if I find a mistake I won't be able to sleep. I'm working on the next chapter now so I hope you and your friends will keep reading.
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Suz.