Review for "Be My Detonator"

"Be My Detonator"

(#) pepper17 2012-03-18

mmk so I love the way you write and it's freaking hilarious but the more BMD went on the more it seemed like the brain cells took over. I didn't like how gee became pretty much unable the function BUT I loveloveloveloved frank the whole story he was soooo awesome and I really liked how he was the chill cool one while gee was the awkward one. so ya do something different and kill the brain cells so you can change it up and keep being awesome:)