You are a great writer. I like the alternating POVs I guess, it doesn't matter that much to me, the story turns out great either way. I don't like Bert -_-... I loved the Used, but as far as this story goes I don't like Bert -_- I don't have any reason, besides the fact he's not Frank....
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Thank you :)
And I know what you mean about Bert, I feel the same way xD