Review for Anorexia Ever After

Anorexia Ever After

(#) KobraBlaze 2012-03-31 12:04:05 AM

Wow! This IS beautiful! I love how you phrase you sentences, you seem to have your own style and I really love it! I really liked Gerard's character despite the fact he shouted at Mikey but he really does care for Mikey or else he wouldn't be in the hospital with him. The story had tears in my tears until the ending when they started rolling down my face with the emotion through the story working up to the last line. I really liked and I think you did an excellent job. I love reading your one shots so please keep them up!!

Author's response

Aw, thank you very much! I find my style to be boring whenever I proof-read my stuff so it's really nice to know that you like it. I wanted to put across just how much Gerard cares about Mikey, even if he did lose his temper with him, so I'm glad that came through.
Thank you sooooo much for taking the time to leave such a lovely review! :D

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