I don't know what to say to this hon. I can tell you probably don't want sympathy though. I'll just let you know that it certainly wasn't shit and you shouldn't tell yourself that. It was masterful because it was backed by real emotion that can't be edited and if that's how you're feeling, you shouldn't have to be afraid to show it, know what I mean? Then again, that was the point of this poem. It was beautiful and I felt that I must review.
-Adnarim Smada
Author's response
Just...thank you.
actuallyy the fact you read this is awesome, I love all ur work. Just gonna say that.
And thanks, just...thanks. You made me smile so big :)
xxIzzy