This is so amazing, its one of the most beautiful things ive ever read. I adored it. I love the metaphores you used and how you just made it seem so effortlessly sad. And extremely serene like that was just what went on in your characters head. And the amazing underlying delusion of how to society what your writing about is beautiful.
Author's response
Wow, thank you! That's made me smile so much :'D Thanks for taking the time to review, it means a lot.