Oh wow! Such a great chapter! I'm practically on the edge of my seat with wonder about what's going to happen next. I didn't really expect for Frank to kiss Mikey, but it was a really nice surprise. I wonder what's going to happen with Frank and Mikey now that Frank kissed him and then ran away. And Frank's attitude in the story isn't the best it could be, but that just makes the story more original. There are not many stories where Frank isn't perfect, so I really like Frank's personality here. It hasn't been done much before. He really is intense like he was described in an earlier chapter. Anyway, I can't wait for Mikey to tell him everything. Well, great job and I really can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's response
wow, thanks for such an awesome review! I kinda hoped people wouldn't see the kiss coming so I'm glad you like the surprise. Frank and Mikey's relationship is definitely going to develop in some way in the future chapters. Frank was supposed to be sort of...imperfect in this story, I wanted him to be a bit of a dick sometimes and really intense. thank you again and an update shouldn't be too far away.