Review for What I Want

What I Want

(#) tortillachip 2012-04-14 08:52:25 AM

This is amazing! I can't stop thinking about the lines about the inside scars. Sure, of course a lot of people are really hurt on the inside if they cut themselves, but I've never thought about it that way before. I guess if it ever came up I would think about the actual process, and not what was happening to the person to make them want to cut. I really liked that line. I also really liked the last part. That was very powerful and carried a lot of emotion. Overall, this poem was very strong, interesting, and had me thinking the whole way through. Great job!!!

Author's response

Thank you very much! I'm glad that the lines made you think. A lot of people just think it's mindless cutting, just slicing away when that isn't the case at all; it's a very psychological thing.
Thank you very much for taking the time to review! :D

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