Review for Empty Face.
Empty Face.
(#) DisenchatedDestroya 2012-04-16 12:30:03 PM
Sorry to sound like some sort of rabid fan-girl, but: THIS IS AMAZING!!!!
I think that this might possibly be my favorite poem of yours so far, thus making it my favorite poem full stop. It just had that deep meaningful beginning, the sort that I think a lot of people will find relatable, and then that perfect ending that makes it feel like everything will be okay in the end because we will always be who we are, the little differences in us make sure of that.
Great work, with a great rhythm and structure too, and there's nothing I would change about it.
Well done! :D
I think that this might possibly be my favorite poem of yours so far, thus making it my favorite poem full stop. It just had that deep meaningful beginning, the sort that I think a lot of people will find relatable, and then that perfect ending that makes it feel like everything will be okay in the end because we will always be who we are, the little differences in us make sure of that.
Great work, with a great rhythm and structure too, and there's nothing I would change about it.
Well done! :D
Author's response
This review actually made my day- Thank you so much! I can't stop smiling :'D Thanks for taking the time to leave such a detailed review- I always look forward to your reviews :D
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