Review for Sweet Deception
(#) DisenchatedDestroya 2012-04-18 01:53:51 PM
But this poem, it was really deep and made me think about things; about being blinded from the truth, from what people truly are because that's the way the world has taught us to function. Just smile and be normal, don't question anything because as long as we don't them then they can't question themselves. I don't know if that's what this was trying to say, bur that's kinda what it made me think of.
My favorite line was probably "Scars of fallacy and fictitious lips,". It was a wonderful metaphor and created a great sense of imagery.
Anyway, sorry for leaving such a long-ass review.
Great job on an amazing piece of poetry! :D
I hadn't actually seen this poem that way- for once, this was a much more personal piece of writing, but I'm really glad it made you think like that, because that's another side to it I really think about and I totally get what you mean.
I so rarely write poetry that's this personal, so I'm glad you liked it and thanks so much for taking the time (again) to leave such a lovely review!
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