This sucked? Yeah, and I lost my virginity to Ryan Ross. This was perfect; it was sadorable, it had Gertrick, it had Pikey, it had a fight scene, it had wise Patrick Stump. When Pete said that Sweetness was sleeping, I literally exclaimed "FUCKING ADORABLE!" and got odd looks from my dog. This chapter was awesomely long too! You're a great writer and this is a kick-ass story. Hope you update soon!
You lost your virginity to Ryro?! You lucky, lucky girl. ;P
Thank you very much! I'm glad you saw the glimmers of Gertrick in there, I wasn't sure if I made enough of it for it to actually register. It definitely did have a wise Patrick Stump; he is the god of all knowledge. ;)
I'll try my best to update later today/tonight.
Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a nice review! :D