Review for Together
(#) KobraBlaze 2012-04-21 04:48:08 PM
I'm pleased that you could see both sides of the argument despite it being in Patrick's POV. Patrick is definitely the most reasonable/normal one out of the four main characters, he just tries to help and do what is right by the innocent party. It's nice to know that came across alright. :)
Yeah, both Way brothers are emotionally hurt and I'm relieved that came through alright. As I am with the fact that the Gertrick was actually noticable and didn't go over the reader's head.
I'll try my best to update today/tonight.
Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a detailed review! :D
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