Review for Together

Together

(#) KobraBlaze 2012-04-21 04:48:08 PM

Okay. This is just unbelievable! I love it! I'm addicted. Firstly, the plot is really really good. And I can really see both sides of Gerard and Pete's argument against each other But you really did excellent with this chaper being in Patricks POV. It really showed how fair and reasonable he is. He's not taking anyone's side but Mikey who is the only innocent one (apart from himself!). I also loved how you showed that both Gerard and Pete were in the wrong with what they and how fast Patrick was to notice this. Also at the beginning, I really saw how emotionally hurt Gerard really is as well as Mikey. And I think this really adds to the Gertrick which I think is really interesting and quite a different pairing but I love it all the same. A brilliant BRILLIANT job and it most definitley didn't suck! Please do update again because I just can't get enough! (I'm not sure if alot of that made sense...) :)

Author's response

Thank you very much; I'm very glad that you like this story!
I'm pleased that you could see both sides of the argument despite it being in Patrick's POV. Patrick is definitely the most reasonable/normal one out of the four main characters, he just tries to help and do what is right by the innocent party. It's nice to know that came across alright. :)
Yeah, both Way brothers are emotionally hurt and I'm relieved that came through alright. As I am with the fact that the Gertrick was actually noticable and didn't go over the reader's head.
I'll try my best to update today/tonight.
Thank you very, very much for taking the time to leave such a detailed review! :D

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