When I saw there was a story you had written that I hadn't read I was like 'Oh, bitch no.'
But alas, it has been read. Hm... I really like it so far. I had trouble following it, but I have trouble following anything on this computer I'm using. (Yes, there is such a thing as too big...)
But I rated it for ambiance, because it really was well written. But I imagine Gerard would speak really slowly while the wheels in his head turn and he decides he wants to change the world.
Other than that, FUCK YES.