Review for Chop.
This created such a vivid image- I loved the ambiance. Creepy, but in such a creative and interesting way. It totally reminded me of The Lovely Bones too (take that as a HUGE compliment- I love that story)...thank you for writing such a brilliant poem. I really like your style.
Thank you! I love creepy things so I'm glad you think it was interestingly creepy :) and I didn't even realise how much it was like The Lovely Bones until I read back through it. Thank you for reviewing, I'm just pleased you enjoyed my writing!