This was just... amazing. Brilliant piece of writing. Each word just flowed onto the next, reading it was like watching water flow from a bottle. The way you wrote it, the paragraphing was really well done and just... wow. The whole metaphorical meaning and everything. I feel like a bad writer now.
Well done. *claps*
Ally xoxo
Author's response
Thank you so much, that's a really huge compliment :'D I'm glad you liked it and thanks so much for taking the time to leave such a lovely review!