Review for Ownership

Ownership

(#) KobraBlaze 2012-05-06 03:56:48 PM

This is just a big let down... that you can't see how BRILLIANT this is! I mean it's just absolutely amazing how you write. I really loved the idea of this. Just one little scene but you created a hell of a lot more out of it. It was really interesting read! I loved how even though Pete is acting a little immature (for lack of a better word), Gerard still saw how much Pete really does are about Mikey, showing how much of a great boyfriend he will be by having Gerard's permission. And even the fact that he asked Gerard first knowing he was going to date Mikey anyway was a sign of determination and true love for Mikey. I really enjoyed reading this. It was absolutely perfect!!! :)

Author's response

Aw, thank you very much! It's so lovely of you to be so kind about my writing! I'm very glad you liked the idea, I wasn't sure if it really worked all that well. Pete was being just a little immature, but even through that he could still show Gerard how much he loved and cares about Mikey. I'm extremely pleased that the point about him asking in the first place got through to you; that was intended to show that he really does love Mikey because he's only doing it to be responsible/have a good start with Mikey.

Thank you very, very much! :D

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