This is actually brilliant. I don't think I've read a fanfiction in 2nd person present tense but it really works. The writing is genius, really natural but like...yeah. I loved this:
“-cause people seem to have all these little loops and settings in their heads and like some of it’s the simple stuff like not walking under ladders or keeping the volume at an even number on your TV, but then it’s the same for bigger things too like how everyone thought for so long sitting next to someone with AIDs on the bus could kill you and no one seems to even notice how stupid our brains are”
That whole paragraph just made me sit back and say "Huh."
So literally logging on to these reviews is the best way to end a day like ever
Also I don't actually know what 2nd person present tense is (/I'm dumb I know/) so I'm gonna google the shit out of that now!
I'm so glad!