Oh dear. You. Have. TALENT. I swear to God, it was like being in the story. I love how you lead the reader to your point before you make it, instead of just throwing it out there and cutting right to the point. Part of the fun of reading your stories is following the intricate web of writing that you make, and then getting wrapped up in it until it's just me and the story. I am still absolutely floored by your description, and I can definitely see you going places. Just don't forget the people on FicWad when you get there, yeah? Oh, and never be nervous about posting anything. This was art, and art should never be silenced by fear.
~ Haili