(#) amos222 2012-05-31 08:26:04 PM
Woah. That was… how do I respond to that? Seriously, how does one pick apart anything about that chapter and try to give a name to it. How does one look at something like that objectively and discuss merits or faults of the writing or plot? I can't. Not even a bit. I feel bad because I can usually pick up at least two points that really stood out in particular, but everything stood out. I can't decide which of my favorite parts was the best. I love that Ocean sucks rocks, because I, frankly, dislike women in fanfictions. I hope she doesn't come back. I loved the little monologue that Mikey gave to Frank about how his sexuality wouldn't change who he is. I loved every part where Frank was in defense of Gerard because he knows how Gerard feels and can relate. My heart shattered when Gerard basically said that Frank didn't matter, and I shed a tear when Frank found the hoodie. I can't remember if this is supposed to turn into a Frerard, but I can't see it happening myself, which either means it won't happen or there's a lot of the story left to be written, which makes me beyond happy. Thank you so, so, SO much for updating this and being beautiful and amazing and perfect and talented, and congratulations on getting a laptop!! I'm happy for you.