Review for Wrapped in Angel's Wings
Just one thing, I felt like your characters were very ooc. No offense but I just can't imagine Scot calling someone honey or Logan hugging warren ^^
I had Logan hug Warren to show that he is in fact capable of compassion and Scott is often seen as the 'go to' guy, the one that handles everything when Xavier isn't around and when dealing with a teenager who is in shock, you would want to find a name to use that would soothe them and be seen as non threatening.
Furthermore, you may want to check your spelling before submitting a review. Scott, as you can read has two 't's not one.
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