Review for The Beginning
The Beginning
(#) ValentineRevenge 2012-06-12 06:25:01 PM
Even though this is so short, I love the way it has so much emotion in it. I was nearly crying by the end of it. I love the way you use the flashbacks in this.
It's cute but sad, the way he's like he loves the memories he had, but wishes that his friend could be there to help him enjoy it, and still considers Ryan his best friend, even though he's gone.
It's cute but sad, the way he's like he loves the memories he had, but wishes that his friend could be there to help him enjoy it, and still considers Ryan his best friend, even though he's gone.
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Thank you! I'm really glad you liked it and could feel the emotion in it.
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