Review for Young Cardinals

Young Cardinals

(#) detonationmouse 2012-06-18

You finally updated! Sorry-that came out wrong. I didn't mean to sound like a jerk. . . and I was so happy to see such a long chapter. :) shrugs Yanno, I'm just gonna pitot out there- this update is longer than the years since my teacher was twenty. And that's really saying something. I like the whole family thing going on. It's very realistic to my lifetime with my older brothers. So yeh. . . Thank you!

X Allie :3

Author's response

Haa, thank you. And I'm pleased you think the whole family thing seems real, it was supposed to come across that way.