Review for Sleeping Beauty
Sleeping Beauty
(#) TheLittleSinner 2012-06-26 08:03:21 PM
D'aww. This was fucking adorable, bro. My only suggestions are to perhaps work a bit more on formatting the paragraphs, and lengthening it? Cuz I mean, fuck. I definitely want to read more of your stuff.
Author's response
Yeah, thanks for reveiwing! My mission is now going to be to find a way to fix the paragraphing, and to expand my one-shots. Thanks!
Filter
You won't see stories with a lower score when you browse or search. Log in to adjust filter.
0
Featured Story
-
Silence (Death Rattles)
by hermitrisin (PG-13)A perspective on the relationship of nineteenth century French poets Arthur Rimbaud and Paul Verlain...
In: Historical
Site Stats
- Authors: 197983
- Stories: 39112
Recent Stories
-
You Only Hear the Music When Your Heart Begins to Break
by IloveMCRmy (PG-13)Rachel is the new girl at Belleville high school for her senior year, but what happens when she meet...
-
Chicago On Fire
by ficfriction (R)In regards to his own life, Pete Wentz had stopped having moments of fear when he was turned by Will...
In: Fall Out Boy
-
A Lost Friend
by USA_Tiger (PG-13)Harry finally becomes a Animagus, but his new form has powers he never knew of! Now he's in Nerima J...
In: Harry Potter
-
Witness
by Killjoyxoxo (R)"GEE!" Little Frankie screams, running to his best friend's room. "Gee, guess wha-" he repeats, open...
-
Umm.... Killjoy... Drawings... for you?
by DropAHeart (PG-13)*Sobs*