Review for Sleeping Beauty

Sleeping Beauty

(#) TheLittleSinner 2012-06-26 08:03:21 PM

D'aww. This was fucking adorable, bro. My only suggestions are to perhaps work a bit more on formatting the paragraphs, and lengthening it? Cuz I mean, fuck. I definitely want to read more of your stuff.

Author's response

Yeah, thanks for reveiwing! My mission is now going to be to find a way to fix the paragraphing, and to expand my one-shots. Thanks!

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