Review for The Embodiment of lost love(for music and words)
The Embodiment of lost love(for music and words)
(#) CosmicZombie 2012-06-28 04:16:50 AM
Eep. I have shivers! That was really good- poetry is such a personal thing, but I really felt this struck a chord with me. Your use of language and rhythm was great, and I especially loved this line: 'With my face carved from tears of the broken'. I wish I'd come up with that, it's brilliant!
A great little thought-provoking read. Thank you very much for posting.
Lucy X_O
A great little thought-provoking read. Thank you very much for posting.
Lucy X_O
Author's response
Thank you! It means a lot, especially coming from you.
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