Review for Phantoms
(#) XxPerfectTomorrowxX 2012-07-09 02:47:14 PM
It's so full of detail. Man, I felt like I was actually watching a television show with how much detail there was. Do you know how awesome you have to be, to make a story so realistic to one's mind?
I'm so glad that you made it where Ryan's dad isn't abusive. (I know I'm guilty of abuse ridden stories and just can't help myself but I hate when Ryan's dad is written as abusive.)
Poor Ryan though, he had to face the accusations towards his father from Spencer AND Brendon.
And oh my, poor Brendon! Poor Ryan! Poor both of them! I'm so freaking curious as to WHY they are both being haunted by each other.
It's so dark, and so deliciously written that I just want more, as usual with your writing.
The ending was very emotional and it's sad how betrayed Brendon seems to feel, since Ryan didn't tell him that he wasn't crazy. All I can envision is how much it would suck to feel crazy, actually think you are crazy and be unable to do anything.
I'm so sucked in to this, and so pleased with this update.
I know it may take awhile, but I'm still excited for the next update. :D
Aww, thanks. I know I feel like that writing it, because I imagine scenes playing out in my head before I write them. But that is very high praise, so thank you thank you thank you thank you very much!
I know. It gets annoying reading fics where he is. Plus, I'm not good at writing abuse and stuff like that. Ahh, I know. But that's just the automatic assumption, I guess. Drunk parent, injuries... You get the picture.
Hahah. Hmmm.... we shall see, won't we? And yes, incase you're wondering, Jon will be in this. We just haven't met him yet. XD I hope you enjoy his part.
It would indeed suck. Actually, it would more than suck, and that's why Brendon got so worked up about it, because Ryan didn't tell him about his own Phantom.
I'm so glad that you (and others) like it! Hopefully you're still saying that when it gets to a suckier part (in my opinion) of the plot.
Hah, I'm working on it, I promise! :)
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