Review for Sick.
Sick.
(#) DisenchatedDestroya 2012-07-11 04:40:48 AM
I'm not entirely sure how you do it, but it seems that everything you write is something that I find extremely relatable. But not only is your poetry relatable (a great and impressive feat in itself) but it is also grabbing, well-written and original. I got a real sense of emotion from this, of desperation almost, and that just shows how much power you have over the words.
I think my favorite line was probably,
"A wrung-out soul undermined,"
because it was a very vivid metaphor and a really clever one at that.
Fantastic job! :D
I think my favorite line was probably,
"A wrung-out soul undermined,"
because it was a very vivid metaphor and a really clever one at that.
Fantastic job! :D
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