Review for I May Be Blind, But I See More Than You Know
I May Be Blind, But I See More Than You Know
(#) XxPerfectTomorrowxX 2012-07-11 09:36:36 AM
I actually loved both conversations with Ryan. It sucked me in and was just great... Plus, foreshadowing, eh? With the whole someone may change your mind sooner than you think about true love part.
And Spencer's number is in her phone now, and even though it seems so small... I pretty much melted at that part.
Then Brendon, with no shirt on. Poor Lou, who can't see it. That truly sucks, lol.
But seriously?!? She needs to kick Brendon's ass for hitting her with yet another pillow. And you know, for not wearing a shirt while she can't see.
I can't believe I missed this update. I just came to check on it because I was hoping it would be updated soon and I re-read through the last chapter sometimes so that I don't forget (and because I'm the ultimate creeper in disguise) and I noticed I hadn't rated or reviewed this one.
Great chapter, my favorite so far.
And Spencer's number is in her phone now, and even though it seems so small... I pretty much melted at that part.
Then Brendon, with no shirt on. Poor Lou, who can't see it. That truly sucks, lol.
But seriously?!? She needs to kick Brendon's ass for hitting her with yet another pillow. And you know, for not wearing a shirt while she can't see.
I can't believe I missed this update. I just came to check on it because I was hoping it would be updated soon and I re-read through the last chapter sometimes so that I don't forget (and because I'm the ultimate creeper in disguise) and I noticed I hadn't rated or reviewed this one.
Great chapter, my favorite so far.
Author's response
Aww, thank you! I thought it was a little too much of him, but now that's out of the way, the rest of the story will definitely be more Spencer-centric. ;) It is, after all, a Spencer fic.
Hah, yes. Spencer's Ryan's best friend - how could he not know, even if Spencer hasn't explicitly told him? XD Yeah, so maybe Jon's noticed it too!
Actually, one of the reasons I wanted to write a blind fic was so that it would focus more on personalities (however fictional they may be) rather than just looks alone. I've read too many fics - be they slash or original pairings - where people always get together based on looks alone, and it just annoyed me. So I decided to be different. :)
Believe me, Brendon'ss will be kicked it the next chapter - by Yankee! XD And believe me, that pillow fight just wrote itself! That wasn't even planned when I sat down to write this chapter.
Ahh, I enjoy your reviews and comments too much for you to be a creepy stalker! :3 Thank you so much! I hope I can keep delivering stuff that meets your (and other readers) expectations.
Hah, yes. Spencer's Ryan's best friend - how could he not know, even if Spencer hasn't explicitly told him? XD Yeah, so maybe Jon's noticed it too!
Actually, one of the reasons I wanted to write a blind fic was so that it would focus more on personalities (however fictional they may be) rather than just looks alone. I've read too many fics - be they slash or original pairings - where people always get together based on looks alone, and it just annoyed me. So I decided to be different. :)
Believe me, Brendon'ss will be kicked it the next chapter - by Yankee! XD And believe me, that pillow fight just wrote itself! That wasn't even planned when I sat down to write this chapter.
Ahh, I enjoy your reviews and comments too much for you to be a creepy stalker! :3 Thank you so much! I hope I can keep delivering stuff that meets your (and other readers) expectations.
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