Review for This Is The First Thing
This Is The First Thing
(#) GreenDaySavedMyLife 2012-07-15 09:22:28 AM
This is the first story in a long while that has actually brought tears to my eyes. Your spelling and grammar is excellent, and the plot line is amazing. The only think I have to say is the POV's get a little confusing at the end, but everything else was great. Thank you for posting an amazing story on here. It seems there aren't that many these days(:
Author's response
Thank you so much, that really means something coming from someone who actually HAS an appreciation of grammar (do they exist on this site? Apparently they do! :O) just keep in mind it's all in Frank's POV (I think. Can't actually remember.) Thanks for such a lovely review and thank you for reading.
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