You´re so gifted with the whole childhood memory thing. (God, I wish I was 7 again. I mean my body, my mind´s still at that developmental stage.) I can´t stress it enough: What you´re doing with this story is über-over-amazing. Your characters are totally well rounded-off and true-to-life. I don´t hesitate to point out that a little Patrick-on-Pete does wonders to my fanatsy. Whoops... there goes a rating point.
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pete on patrick is too hot. wait, why isn't some one making a one shot about that? where's evie?? we must demand it.
again, thank you. i really can't say it enough. well, i prolly could, but, well, i'm not gonna.