Well, I can't complain about you rambling on, because even though you have taken... a while... you're still undoubtedly the best writer on here. I'd be thrilled if I could develop my stories even half as well as you can.
The chapter was brilliant. Of course, it's within my own preference that the Frerard would be here quicker, but that's my opinion. It would be a different story if it was shorter. You're a fantastic writer. Can't wait until the next chapter.
Wow, thank you so much! I guess the speed of the frerard just depends on the characters and storyline- although I do tend to lean towards letting it go too slowly than too fast. Thank you very much, I'm so glad you like it and I promise I'll update as soon as I can! :D