Woah. That was truly amazing. I love the way you interpreted Franks thoughts. It was up and down and kind of funny. I loved it. Mikey is a manipulative little kid. Haha. I loved the first official chapter. That was just great. Update as soon as you can.
Author's response
Thank you very much! Mikey is pretty manipulative, isn't he? I'm really relieved that you liked the first official chapter; thanks!
And I'll probably update on Monday or Tuesday at the latest. :)